Your points aren't incorrect. There is such a thing as subjective bias and also when things aren't blind it may (but not will) make things prone to a visual and perceptive bias leading to different conclusions.Is there anything specific I have written that you would you say is contradicted by that? There is nothing you say here that I disagree with in particular.
I think a re-wording would be better. A lot of is and will should be changed to "may" or "might". Overall the piece is written heavily implying that the listener was victim or will be victim to subjective bias and therein get it "wrong" when they declare a difference. Yet we have no idea if they were or would be victim to a subjective bias that then made them "wrong" when they declare a difference. Though this could have been. On the other hand, they also may not have been and got it correct. We are making an assumption here and telling the reader what they experienced was due to subjective bias without actually running any test on the person and gear in question to do so.
Though it's understandable what you are saying here. The wording sound in "how the device sounds" implies the perception of the human brain which uses multiple senses for its perception including audio quality. The "bias" we are talking about is normal for us. It's not incorrect for somebody to see something look shiny that they like and hear it sounding better. Their perception was working fine and wasn't wrong.It is also testing how it “makes you feel”. While that is interesting psychologically, it does not justify claims about how the device sounds because audio quality is no longer the only variable.
Since we are talking about perception it does justify claims how the device sounds because, something attractive "enhancing the sound" is part of the perception. But if you said something like "does not justify claims about the sound output by the speaker/device" vs "how the device sounds would be more accurate" because now you are not talking about perception which is subjective vs the actual sound output which is objective.
We don't know if they usually will and this is heavily implying that the user will also do this. My problem is the wording "will". Changing it to "may" would be more appropriate. As well as "may confound". And also at the end "how the device really sounds" could be edited to "how the device really sounds without additional perceptive bias".If the listener is expecting to hear more detail through a particular device, they usually will; their brain will add detail that never existed. This confounds the ability of an unblinded test to objectively determine how the device really sounds.
◦ Your significant other is just as likely to be picking up on social cues as they are to be hearing a real improvement. It is possible that you could get the same response by rustling around behind your A/V setup for half an hour without changing anything and then asking what they thought.In addition to the above, your significant other is just as susceptible to session-to-session test-variance as you are.
Instead of your significant other IS just as likely. Change to "may be just as likely". Because we don't know if they are for sure just as likely.
*minor nitpick Instead of it IS possible. Change to "it may be possible" though technically even "it is possible" would pass muster but it's not guaranteed to be possible for that particular person. But if you don't want to change that, that's fine.*
We don't know anything about if the wife wants to support me in my audio testing. My wife is usually annoyed when I ask her feedback on audio (you know how it is!). She does not cut corners when telling me something sounds good or bad. Sometimes I think it sounds bad and she thinks it sounds great. So by pointing to spousal support being the reason your wife hears things better is not scientific. It is an assumption and possibly shortchanging the wife's ability to make independent decisions.If they say it sounds better, that doesn’t mean they are lying; usually they want to support you, so they really do hear the improvement that they expect.
You could say "Maybe they are picking up on your excitement or enthusiasm and become biased to hear the improvement that you expect."
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